Mrs. Stephanie Woit
Short Simple Sentences
A simple sentence, strictly defined has a subject and a
verb: it consists of one independent clause. A simple
sentence may have a compound subject, a compound
verb, a modifier, and an object or a complement, but it
still is one independent clause.
Examples:
There is a problem, though.
But the chances are miniscule.
This must be Phillip’s theory, anyway.
The emails and phone messages addressed to my former self come from a distant
race of people with exotic concerns and far too much time on their hands.
Sentence Fragments
A sentence fragment is an incomplete sentence that
readers understand to be complete. Some fragments
are missing a subject, verb, or both; other fragments
have a subject and verb, but are dependent clauses.
Consider the following examples:
Wouldn’t it be better for the kids if the mother stayed at home? No offense, but
no.
Hurry, I urge my country. Before it is too late.
Rhetorical and Stylistic Strategy
A series of simple sentences can become monotonous,
but 1 or 2 short simple sentences can be rhetorically
effective in a number of situations:
After several long sentences
As a summary of what the writer has just said
As a transition between sentences or paragraphs
Essentially, one or two short simple sentences create
emphasis by contrast. As a writer, when you juxtapose 1 or
2 short simple sentences with several longer ones, you call
attention to the short simple ones.
Rhetorical and Stylistic Strategy
Sometimes writers use sentence fragments, especially short
ones. Occasionally you may use them for effect. What is
important is that you use them for a special reason:
To make a transition
To signal a conclusion
To emphasize an important point
Sentence fragments slows readers down and emphasize importance
of time. A WORD OF CAUTION….use both simple sentences
and fragments SPARINGLY! Overused, they lose their punch
and become a gimmick. You NEVER want your audience to
think that you made a grammatical error.