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Critical Reading Assignment by Olukorede Daramola

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Worldview Reflection.
In my view, our relationship with the land and non-human beings should be one of reverence
and sustainability. The article by Timothy A. Wise, sheds light on the ecological
consequences of certain agricultural practices, urging me to consider the impact of my own
actions. Growing up I always believed in the importance of nurturing a deep connection with
nature, spending time outdoors, and advocating for environmentally conscious choices.
History, beliefs, and traditions hold great significance in shaping my identity and daily life.
While the article explored the impact of modern agricultural methods on traditional farming
practices, it reinforced my appreciation for the wisdom passed down through generations,
because my dad’s family is full of farmers and that was how they make a living, I value the
cultural heritage of my family and community, and I actively seek to preserve and learn from
their traditions. Integrating these teachings into my life helps me navigate the complexities of
the modern world while staying grounded in my roots. Technology has undoubtedly shaped
my life in both positive and negative ways.
Many articles and discussions we have had in class shed insights into the consequences of
technological advancements in agriculture resonated with me. While technology offers
numerous benefits, I am mindful of its potential drawbacks, such as disconnection from
nature and overreliance on artificial solutions. I strive to find a balance by leveraging
technology for education, connectivity, and positive change while ensuring that it aligns with
sustainable practices and does not compromise our natural environment. When it comes to
resource distribution, I believe in striking a balance between fairness and opportunity, our
current exploration of agricultural policies and their effects on marginalized communities
prompted me to consider the importance of equitable access to resources.
While I recognize the value of economic competition, I support policies that prioritize social
welfare and bridge the gaps between certain income classes. By advocating for equality
among members of my society, I hope to contribute to a more just and inclusive society, a
society where no group of people suffers endlessly without intervention. I value personal
autonomy, allowing individuals to express who they are and their beliefs the way they want to
and pursue their passions. However, I also understand the need for a well-functioning society
that ensures the safety and well-being of its members. A proper mix of personal freedom with
collective responsibility where everyone looks after their fellow human is essential for
creating a harmonious and inclusive community, and the lack of this is a serious problem in
many societies in our time.
To sum it up my worldview reflects my personal reflections and values, I strive to cultivate a
sustainable and respectful relationship with the land, honor the significance of history,
beliefs, and traditions, navigate the impacts of technology responsibly, advocate for equitable
resource distribution, and uphold personal freedoms within the framework of a harmonious
society.
Critical Reading
"Africa’s Land Use Problem: Is Green Revolution Agriculture a Solution or a Cause?
This article is aimed at those interested in African agriculture and environmental
sustainability and the central claim of the text is that the Green Revolution programs in
Africa, particularly those promoted by the Alliance for a Green Revolution in Africa
(AGRA), are causing more harm than good to the local communities and its people by
reducing crop diversity and leading to unsustainable agricultural expansion.
The context of the article is the ongoing debate on the impact and effectiveness of the Green
Revolution in Africa. The Green Revolution, promoted heavily by AGRA and supported by
various countries in Africa and backed by their governments, is a set of practices designed to
increase agricultural productivity through the use of modern farming technologies, like
commercial seeds and fertilizers, and the utilization of other modern-day technologies.
However, the author argues against this model, presenting a counter-narrative that criticizes
its outcomes and proposes agroecology as an alternative.
The author constructs his arguments through a combination of empirical and logical
reasoning. Empirical reasoning is demonstrated through the use of data from AGRA
countries, particularly Zambia and Rwanda, showing increases in maize and rice production,
reduction in traditional staple crops, and the rising numbers of undernourished people despite
increased maize production. Logical reasoning is used to explain how government subsidies
and support for certain crops have influenced farmers' decisions, leading to a decline in crop
diversity and an increase in land under cultivation.
However, Wise in his article does not provide a clear methodology for collecting or
interpreting the data he used. While the evidence provided is very strong and well put
together, it is unclear whether it is primary or secondary, but we can also note he provided
certain graphs and tables that show AGRA’s progress report for 3 years, and also the
productivity report for Zambia and these are core evidence that back up his argument.
While the argument is logically coherent and makes good use of empirical data to support its
claims, it could be improved by considering counter-arguments and explaining the
methodology used for data collection and interpretation. Additionally, the author makes an
assumption that agroecology can replace the Green Revolution practices without providing
substantial empirical evidence. Therefore, while the article provides valuable insights into the
problems with the Green Revolution in Africa, its argument could be more persuasive with
additional evidence and a more balanced perspective.
The overall quality of the article’s argument is well put together and would be satisfactory but
Wise here would have issues if counterarguments are laid down. The argument proposed that
the Green Revolution in Africa is causing more damage through unsustainable agricultural
expansion and a reduction in crop diversity—is logical and well supported by empirical
evidence from specific countries (Zambia and Rwanda) where these programs have been
implemented. But even the evidence provided does largely support the author’s claims,
illustrating how an emphasis on maize and rice production, facilitated by government
incentives, has resulted in declines in other crops and an alarming rise in undernourishment
despite the increased maize yield. This effectively showcases the unintended negative
impacts of the Green Revolution approach.
In conclusion, despite the article's shortcomings, it is credible to a large extent. The
author succeeds in drawing attention to the potential negative impacts of the Green
Revolution in Africa and brings to light important issues about agricultural sustainability
and food security on the continent. The specific cases of Zambia and Rwanda offer a
compelling look into the real-world implications of these agricultural policies. The
article also prompts a valuable discussion about the need for alternative agricultural
strategies, like agroecology, in the face of these challenges.
Reading Reaction
Reading Timothy A. Wise's article stirred various emotions in me, deeply rooted in my
worldview. Growing up around farming and believing strongly in sustainability, I found
myself aligning with Wise's critique of the Green Revolution's adverse effects on the
environment and traditional farming practices.
My respect for traditional wisdom echoed in my appreciation of the author's concern about
lost crop diversity. My experiences as part of a farming family amplified my empathy toward
the issues faced by African farmers, whose challenges resonate with my own heritage.
While I recognize technology's benefits, my worldview favors a balance. I found myself
nodding at Wise's critique of modern farming's overreliance on technology, highlighting the
need for responsible usage.
My belief in equitable resource distribution and social welfare was reinforced as Wise shed
light on how marginalized communities bear the brunt of the Green Revolution. This echoed
my advocacy for fairness in society and policy-making.
Finally, my commitment to personal autonomy and collective responsibility resonated with
Wise's argument for more farmer-inclusive policies. My reading experience and evaluation of
Wise's article clearly reflect my worldview: a balance between respecting traditions,
environmental sustainability, equitable distribution, and harmonious societal functioning.
Citation
Wise, T. A. (2021). Africa’s Land Use Problem: Is Green Revolution Agriculture a Solution
or a Cause?
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